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不管我寫的好或不好..... (應該是很爛啦)
歡迎各位批評指教~
有錯字...文法錯誤一定要跟我說喔!!我會感謝你們的~
第一篇
OH, MY GOD!! I was totally as heavy as a dinosaur. I couldn't gain more weight, but how could I do? I thought I had the habit of eating junk food for meal instead of nutritious things and fruit. Now that I knew I had to lose some weight, I made a plan that I must not eat any more junk food, eat more fruit and vegetables, instead. Maybe do some exercise would have something good to my losing weight. Now, my habit has changed, I don't eat what would gain my weight, and I go jogging in the park every day. I take out my pants, trying to wear them on, but they are too large to wear. It means that I have achieved my goal, losing weight.
第二篇
One day, I woke up seeing the one in the mirror. "Is that me?" I wondered, "When do I have such a big belly? Is it just a dream?" I pinched myself. Ouch! It wasn't a dream. It was about the time to make it "normal". In spite of the fact that I didn't like doing exercise, I had to use the strange jogging machine to exercise. I was scared using the thing. With a moment of abstraction, I fall down. Pure blood spilled out from my leg, which was very hurt. I couldn't help crying. There was no one helped me until my PE teacher came to make me stand. She told me not to use that machine again. It seemed that I still had a long way to go.
歡迎各位批評指教~
有錯字...文法錯誤一定要跟我說喔!!我會感謝你們的~
第一篇
OH, MY GOD!! I was totally as heavy as a dinosaur. I couldn't gain more weight, but how could I do? I thought I had the habit of eating junk food for meal instead of nutritious things and fruit. Now that I knew I had to lose some weight, I made a plan that I must not eat any more junk food, eat more fruit and vegetables, instead. Maybe do some exercise would have something good to my losing weight. Now, my habit has changed, I don't eat what would gain my weight, and I go jogging in the park every day. I take out my pants, trying to wear them on, but they are too large to wear. It means that I have achieved my goal, losing weight.
第二篇
One day, I woke up seeing the one in the mirror. "Is that me?" I wondered, "When do I have such a big belly? Is it just a dream?" I pinched myself. Ouch! It wasn't a dream. It was about the time to make it "normal". In spite of the fact that I didn't like doing exercise, I had to use the strange jogging machine to exercise. I was scared using the thing. With a moment of abstraction, I fall down. Pure blood spilled out from my leg, which was very hurt. I couldn't help crying. There was no one helped me until my PE teacher came to make me stand. She told me not to use that machine again. It seemed that I still had a long way to go.
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